Post by Haku on May 29, 2012 21:51:11 GMT -5
Here's a Zoids RP I was doing with a guy named Leon featuring Hera (in green), Haku (Navy) and Hera's minions (the other colors). It's got the NC0 feel.
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"Hnnn..." She took a deep breath, her chest expanding as the cool, conditioned air rushed into her nostrils. "Hmmmm~" It receded as she forced hot air from her lungs and back out those very orifices. Her piercing, ruby eyes flashed opened with a look of hardened determination. "Alright, team. ONWARD!" Cutting through the vacant air like a blade, her lithe arm extended itself forward and erected into a deliberate point. "Onward to Victory! We have to win this battle to rank up. Do NOT mess this up!"
"Yes, Hera. We are closing in on the battlefield as you speak."
"Excellent." Hera responded with a small grin. Oh, how she loved getting what she wanted.
"Haku has loaded the Geno Breaker. Launch systems ready."
"Good, now, you wait for mine command~" She gazed out of the large window in front of her at the battlefield. An abandoned city used by the Zoids Battle Commission for Blind Battles. Hera's specialty green Hover Cargo roved across the desert dunes toward the arena.
Leon had been hired by the other team to help them take down this one but he got paid either way. He stood in the cargo hold working on his Blade Liger most people thought his zoid was under equiped having only the factory weapons.
However Leon had spent most of his time beefing up the joints making them stronger, making his Zoid more mobile and faster. When he had finished his work the team leader walked into the hold. "You ready we have to get out there like right now." He said Leon turned to him "Money up front no refunds." Leon spoke and was paid He then climbed into the cockpit "Okay buddy let's go." He said walking to zoid to the launch platform.
HUUURRRRRR..... The Geno Breaker growled as its pilot, Haku, held his eyes shut. "Hmph."
Like a shooting star, the Judge Capsule streaked through the very heavens before plowing into the city below. Its landing was a loud crash that sent a wave of dust into the adjacent buildings, leaving only a crater several meters deep.
"The Loading Hatches are ready, your highness."
Hera nodded, "Oh, I know. It is only your JOB to ensure they are so."
"All Systems Check." Another worker said. "How're you feeling, Haku?"
"Shut the hell up."
"Aaaaalllrighty! Sounds good!"
The Judge Capsule emerged from the ground, dust and rubble rolling off the sides of its prestigious white fuselage. "The area within these walls is now restricted. It is a-"
"Now!" Hera called out. "Launch!"
"Yes, ma'am. Haku," The worker pressed a button, "Mobilize!"
"About time." HUUURRR. The Geno Breaker lifted a leg and stomped down on the loading belt beneath it as surges of magnetized lighting fondled the zoid's feet. RRRRR. It lowered its head as its pilot spoke, "Haku here. Mobilizing the Geno Breaker."
Fwoooo.... The static grew more intense. 3....2...1.... SHOOOOM! The Tyrannosaur Zoid was flung from the Hover Cargo and into the air, high over the battlefield. "Hmm." Haku pushed down on a pedal with his feet, igniting the Geno Breaker's High-Output Thrusters, allowing it to stay airborne as he surveyed the arena.
"You ready Leon?" Came a voice into his ear. "Now that's a stupid question." He said sitting relaxed in the cockpit. Leon knew the importances of staying relaxed durning the high speed launch.
Leon had been in may over his time as zoid piolt, he took some deep breathes slowing his heart rate. Soon the gate opened and the Blade Liger was shot out the launch port at high speeds. His Blade Liger's feet touched the ground and Leon mashed the pedal on the far left and the thrusters on the back of the zoid turned to the left firingsending hims out of the way of a large building he had almost run into.
Leon stopped his Blade Liger and surveyed the scene trying to get his bearings. He turned off his comm link and talked to his zoid. "Well Liger, we really need to get team and stay there this running to every other person is startin' to get old fast." He said as the Liger shook his head growling in agreement. Leon could vaugely see the Genobreaker hovering in the air but wasn't sure if it was his oppoenet or not. He didn't even know who many people he was going up against in the first place.
It didn't matter if the team he was working for were with him or not Leon would be the only real threat to the other team. Seeing as how they had lost five straight to this team. He would wait in the center of the street switching his comm on just so the team could hear him. "How many are we going up against. One, two, three tell me something." He asked them as he could hear their zoids launching.
"Blade Liger?" Haku sneered at the opposing Zoid, "Go figure."
Hera then appeared onto Haku's screen via video call, "Haku. What are you up against?" She asked in a tone that was more commanding than her usual, airy persona. "You WILL win this one for me, won't you?" The queen then asked, tilting her head downward as she peered up with her eyes. This was her favor face, using her natural beauty to entice the man into doing as she said since she knew he wasn't one to just accept a command like her closer associates without saying something back. It was his snappy attitude that she knew to avoid, as her own adamant nature would force her into an argument with him.
"Yeah? It's a Blade Liger. I've got this one." The Geno Breaker then began to descend forward as Haku directed the flow of his boosters to behind him. "Once I get in close with Batsu, he's done for. Batsu's offensive capabilities will shine as they always do. Where's your faith in me, BOSS?" A good thud announced the landing of Haku's Geno Breaker, Batsu, on the roof of a building.
"Battlefield set up." The Judge then lifted his arms, "Readdyyyyy?" They were in a perfect V facing away from his body. "FIGHT!" He crossed at his elbows making an X with his arms. The fight is on!
Leon saw the Geno Breaker land, he activated one of the Liger's pulse lazer guns. One of the Liger's blades folded up pointing toward the cockpit a targeting device folded out so Leon could get a precise shot. "If I shoot at you, your just gonna shurg this off." He said taking aim
Leon squeezed off a shot the lazer pulse would whiz through the air and stirke the weak corner of the roof the Geno Breaker was standing on. This would cause a rapid desturction of the building making it nearly impossible to escape the inevitable fall to the ground with the rubble.
"Honestly?" Haku asked, pressing his foot on the pedal to ignite his Rocket Boosters. Batsu kicked off a piece of debris as he hurdled though the air. "Way to miscalculate." He then pulled a trigger on his controls that initiated the mechanisms to flip the backward facing blade on his head forward.
Crafted of a fortified, hardened alloy, the blade's edge shimmered in the light. It then glowed an alien green as the metal blade was infused with an expanded laser to increase its cutting efficiency. "HERE!" HURRR! Batsu lowered his head and tried to sink the blade into the Liger's shoulder. Had it struck, not only could he hamper the enemy's mobility but, more importantly, he would have damaged one of the Blade Liger's four Refrigeration Cooling Vents. Haku was not naive to the capabilities of a Blade Liger, fully aware that prolonged use of its E-Shield and Laser Blades would case it to overheat itself into a state of vulnerability, if not a complete Command System Freeze.
"Hup!" Haku then jerked at the controls, commanding Batsu suddenly pull up. Having landed on the ground, the mechanical theropod lifted its head as its shoulders rose up over the ground. It all happened in a matter of seconds from when Haku cleared the building, he scarcely had time even for himself to turn his head. Using the peripherals of his fiery eyes, he guestimated the Liger's position and twisted the pedals that ignite the boosters to point to his right.
HUURRR!!! The vents on the left sides of Batsu's lower legs opened and released the searing blue flames of a Rocket Booster. Haku then twisted his arms clockwise while clutching his controls. Batsu's X-Breaker arm then extended forcefully, at the effort of several whirling Gyro Caps. It was a shield bash from the X-Breaker's Reinforced Armor Shield directed to the right! Haku did the move in aims to catch Leon if the initial stab missed.
Leon saw the eniter first attack in slow motion he made his Liger lay on it's stomach causing the attack to miss. The second however he wasn't exactly ready for. However Leon did what he did best he made an unorthodox move.
Leon rotated his boosters to the left firing them off, causing his zoid to roll over on its back then over landing on it's feet. Leon turned the zoid to face the GenoBreaker. He kept his mind clear, he folded out the blades on the Liger and fired his dualshock cannon twice.
The rounds were not the typical type they were more like a hybrid smoke Emp round. These rounds would cause immdeate disorientaion and possibly a tempory system freeze. Leon would use this distraction to dart in and attempt to sink his blade into knee joint of the right leg. Leon would circle if the first strike hit and come through to get the left in the same fashion.
BEEP BEEP! Haku narrowed his eyes as his console flashed red, "Not so fast!" He slammed his feet down on the pedals, commanding Batsu to fire up his Wing Thruster Unit and propel himself out of the immediate line of fire.
"Ha!" Batsu then kicked off the ground and leaped into the air, clearing straight over a building with his ignited boosters. The Zoid then disappeared from view, somewhere inside the city arena.
"Oh, smart move, Haku!" Hera praised, realizing he just avoided an explosive attack that likely would have turned the tables. She kept an eye on Leon's zoid and then chuckled. "That Zoid seems to be much slower than Haku's. This should not be too much of a hassle for him."
"But, your majesty, the Liger is more agile. Just look." Her worker said, watching the battle diligently alongside his superior. Hera observed the Blade Liger's dashing forward, her eyes drawn to its shimmering blades. She squinted at the sight, her worker's words lining up with what she was seeing. It was able to turn around and accelerate with an efficiency that exceeded Batsu's due to the Zoid's lesser mass.
"Hmm..Do be careful then, Haku."
"I know what a Liger can do. I'm not underestimating him, Hera. You just watch. I'll win this one for you like all the rest." Batsu hissed as smoke rose from his boosters. He flexed his claws and then turned his head to the side of the building. "Lock and load, Batsu." HUUURRRRR.
"He's good but I got all I need from this." He said then added now it's time to get a good look at things." Leon also knew a thing or two about Geobreakers in genreal prolonged use of it's boosters would cause an over heat just as it would in any zoid just finding the limit is the hard part. "Okay buddy let's show these guys what we can do." He said to his zoid.
Before taking off a full throttle toward the building he was facing running twenty-five feet up the building before bounding off. Catching hold of another building running another twenty-five before jumping off turing in mid air landing on the roof of the first building. Looking toward the Geno Breaker.
He commanded his blades to fold up on it's back and let the aiming eye piece cover his left eye. "This time I'm not gonna miss on purpose." He said into the live com link. He waited for three cross hairs to line up for his shots. The reason for the extra crosshairs was to limit him to dodging behind the building to his right. When he fired the first shot would be aimed at his chest the others would fire three seconds from the first.
HURRR.... Batsu was lying in wait the whole time it took Leon to get to him. Legs bent, Gyro Caps storing the potential energy for the attack to come. All Haku needed was the signal, and here it was. "Perfect." He smiled and slammed his feet on the pedals after jerking his arms back on the controls.
FWOOOOSH! Batsu roared as he kicked off the ground and ignited his Wing Thruster unit, flying up to meet Leon in the air. "YOU'RE MINE!" Haku exclaimed as he pushed his controls forward. The shots whisked by, hitting Batsu's X-Breaker shields. Spinning Gyro Caps propelled the X-Breaker mounts forward. Batsu then roared as his Breakers' scissors sprang into action to snap shut onto the Liger in front of them.
Leon stepped on a pedal pulling back on a control stick that ignited the boosters sending him foreward off the edge of the building narrowly avoiding the claw. "Damn were too evenly matched to end this fast." He said to himself. Falling down toward the ground he extened his blades and used the boosters again this time he glided toward a building that was leaning on another.
When he touched down he could feel the cockpit heating up Damn got to finish this thing fast one of those rolls of mine must have jammed the cooling vent shut or he could have got me I can't seem to remember. He thought "Hey you in the Genobreaker. What do you say we finish this in one final burst I don't know about you but I'm gettin a little warm." He said in the commlick. "Win Losse or Draw I gotta say your problably the best challenge I have have faced." He added.
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The RP isn't done, it's part of what I've been doing on RP.me. As you can see, I'm aiming to put more emphasis on the human pilots and be inside the cockpit more than out, as well as paying note to the technical aspects of the Zoids like the Gyro Caps and such.
Comments? Questions? Anything?
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"Hnnn..." She took a deep breath, her chest expanding as the cool, conditioned air rushed into her nostrils. "Hmmmm~" It receded as she forced hot air from her lungs and back out those very orifices. Her piercing, ruby eyes flashed opened with a look of hardened determination. "Alright, team. ONWARD!" Cutting through the vacant air like a blade, her lithe arm extended itself forward and erected into a deliberate point. "Onward to Victory! We have to win this battle to rank up. Do NOT mess this up!"
"Yes, Hera. We are closing in on the battlefield as you speak."
"Excellent." Hera responded with a small grin. Oh, how she loved getting what she wanted.
"Haku has loaded the Geno Breaker. Launch systems ready."
"Good, now, you wait for mine command~" She gazed out of the large window in front of her at the battlefield. An abandoned city used by the Zoids Battle Commission for Blind Battles. Hera's specialty green Hover Cargo roved across the desert dunes toward the arena.
Leon had been hired by the other team to help them take down this one but he got paid either way. He stood in the cargo hold working on his Blade Liger most people thought his zoid was under equiped having only the factory weapons.
However Leon had spent most of his time beefing up the joints making them stronger, making his Zoid more mobile and faster. When he had finished his work the team leader walked into the hold. "You ready we have to get out there like right now." He said Leon turned to him "Money up front no refunds." Leon spoke and was paid He then climbed into the cockpit "Okay buddy let's go." He said walking to zoid to the launch platform.
HUUURRRRRR..... The Geno Breaker growled as its pilot, Haku, held his eyes shut. "Hmph."
Like a shooting star, the Judge Capsule streaked through the very heavens before plowing into the city below. Its landing was a loud crash that sent a wave of dust into the adjacent buildings, leaving only a crater several meters deep.
"The Loading Hatches are ready, your highness."
Hera nodded, "Oh, I know. It is only your JOB to ensure they are so."
"All Systems Check." Another worker said. "How're you feeling, Haku?"
"Shut the hell up."
"Aaaaalllrighty! Sounds good!"
The Judge Capsule emerged from the ground, dust and rubble rolling off the sides of its prestigious white fuselage. "The area within these walls is now restricted. It is a-"
"Now!" Hera called out. "Launch!"
"Yes, ma'am. Haku," The worker pressed a button, "Mobilize!"
"About time." HUUURRR. The Geno Breaker lifted a leg and stomped down on the loading belt beneath it as surges of magnetized lighting fondled the zoid's feet. RRRRR. It lowered its head as its pilot spoke, "Haku here. Mobilizing the Geno Breaker."
Fwoooo.... The static grew more intense. 3....2...1.... SHOOOOM! The Tyrannosaur Zoid was flung from the Hover Cargo and into the air, high over the battlefield. "Hmm." Haku pushed down on a pedal with his feet, igniting the Geno Breaker's High-Output Thrusters, allowing it to stay airborne as he surveyed the arena.
"You ready Leon?" Came a voice into his ear. "Now that's a stupid question." He said sitting relaxed in the cockpit. Leon knew the importances of staying relaxed durning the high speed launch.
Leon had been in may over his time as zoid piolt, he took some deep breathes slowing his heart rate. Soon the gate opened and the Blade Liger was shot out the launch port at high speeds. His Blade Liger's feet touched the ground and Leon mashed the pedal on the far left and the thrusters on the back of the zoid turned to the left firingsending hims out of the way of a large building he had almost run into.
Leon stopped his Blade Liger and surveyed the scene trying to get his bearings. He turned off his comm link and talked to his zoid. "Well Liger, we really need to get team and stay there this running to every other person is startin' to get old fast." He said as the Liger shook his head growling in agreement. Leon could vaugely see the Genobreaker hovering in the air but wasn't sure if it was his oppoenet or not. He didn't even know who many people he was going up against in the first place.
It didn't matter if the team he was working for were with him or not Leon would be the only real threat to the other team. Seeing as how they had lost five straight to this team. He would wait in the center of the street switching his comm on just so the team could hear him. "How many are we going up against. One, two, three tell me something." He asked them as he could hear their zoids launching.
"Blade Liger?" Haku sneered at the opposing Zoid, "Go figure."
Hera then appeared onto Haku's screen via video call, "Haku. What are you up against?" She asked in a tone that was more commanding than her usual, airy persona. "You WILL win this one for me, won't you?" The queen then asked, tilting her head downward as she peered up with her eyes. This was her favor face, using her natural beauty to entice the man into doing as she said since she knew he wasn't one to just accept a command like her closer associates without saying something back. It was his snappy attitude that she knew to avoid, as her own adamant nature would force her into an argument with him.
"Yeah? It's a Blade Liger. I've got this one." The Geno Breaker then began to descend forward as Haku directed the flow of his boosters to behind him. "Once I get in close with Batsu, he's done for. Batsu's offensive capabilities will shine as they always do. Where's your faith in me, BOSS?" A good thud announced the landing of Haku's Geno Breaker, Batsu, on the roof of a building.
"Battlefield set up." The Judge then lifted his arms, "Readdyyyyy?" They were in a perfect V facing away from his body. "FIGHT!" He crossed at his elbows making an X with his arms. The fight is on!
Leon saw the Geno Breaker land, he activated one of the Liger's pulse lazer guns. One of the Liger's blades folded up pointing toward the cockpit a targeting device folded out so Leon could get a precise shot. "If I shoot at you, your just gonna shurg this off." He said taking aim
Leon squeezed off a shot the lazer pulse would whiz through the air and stirke the weak corner of the roof the Geno Breaker was standing on. This would cause a rapid desturction of the building making it nearly impossible to escape the inevitable fall to the ground with the rubble.
"Honestly?" Haku asked, pressing his foot on the pedal to ignite his Rocket Boosters. Batsu kicked off a piece of debris as he hurdled though the air. "Way to miscalculate." He then pulled a trigger on his controls that initiated the mechanisms to flip the backward facing blade on his head forward.
Crafted of a fortified, hardened alloy, the blade's edge shimmered in the light. It then glowed an alien green as the metal blade was infused with an expanded laser to increase its cutting efficiency. "HERE!" HURRR! Batsu lowered his head and tried to sink the blade into the Liger's shoulder. Had it struck, not only could he hamper the enemy's mobility but, more importantly, he would have damaged one of the Blade Liger's four Refrigeration Cooling Vents. Haku was not naive to the capabilities of a Blade Liger, fully aware that prolonged use of its E-Shield and Laser Blades would case it to overheat itself into a state of vulnerability, if not a complete Command System Freeze.
"Hup!" Haku then jerked at the controls, commanding Batsu suddenly pull up. Having landed on the ground, the mechanical theropod lifted its head as its shoulders rose up over the ground. It all happened in a matter of seconds from when Haku cleared the building, he scarcely had time even for himself to turn his head. Using the peripherals of his fiery eyes, he guestimated the Liger's position and twisted the pedals that ignite the boosters to point to his right.
HUURRR!!! The vents on the left sides of Batsu's lower legs opened and released the searing blue flames of a Rocket Booster. Haku then twisted his arms clockwise while clutching his controls. Batsu's X-Breaker arm then extended forcefully, at the effort of several whirling Gyro Caps. It was a shield bash from the X-Breaker's Reinforced Armor Shield directed to the right! Haku did the move in aims to catch Leon if the initial stab missed.
Leon saw the eniter first attack in slow motion he made his Liger lay on it's stomach causing the attack to miss. The second however he wasn't exactly ready for. However Leon did what he did best he made an unorthodox move.
Leon rotated his boosters to the left firing them off, causing his zoid to roll over on its back then over landing on it's feet. Leon turned the zoid to face the GenoBreaker. He kept his mind clear, he folded out the blades on the Liger and fired his dualshock cannon twice.
The rounds were not the typical type they were more like a hybrid smoke Emp round. These rounds would cause immdeate disorientaion and possibly a tempory system freeze. Leon would use this distraction to dart in and attempt to sink his blade into knee joint of the right leg. Leon would circle if the first strike hit and come through to get the left in the same fashion.
BEEP BEEP! Haku narrowed his eyes as his console flashed red, "Not so fast!" He slammed his feet down on the pedals, commanding Batsu to fire up his Wing Thruster Unit and propel himself out of the immediate line of fire.
"Ha!" Batsu then kicked off the ground and leaped into the air, clearing straight over a building with his ignited boosters. The Zoid then disappeared from view, somewhere inside the city arena.
"Oh, smart move, Haku!" Hera praised, realizing he just avoided an explosive attack that likely would have turned the tables. She kept an eye on Leon's zoid and then chuckled. "That Zoid seems to be much slower than Haku's. This should not be too much of a hassle for him."
"But, your majesty, the Liger is more agile. Just look." Her worker said, watching the battle diligently alongside his superior. Hera observed the Blade Liger's dashing forward, her eyes drawn to its shimmering blades. She squinted at the sight, her worker's words lining up with what she was seeing. It was able to turn around and accelerate with an efficiency that exceeded Batsu's due to the Zoid's lesser mass.
"Hmm..Do be careful then, Haku."
"I know what a Liger can do. I'm not underestimating him, Hera. You just watch. I'll win this one for you like all the rest." Batsu hissed as smoke rose from his boosters. He flexed his claws and then turned his head to the side of the building. "Lock and load, Batsu." HUUURRRRR.
"He's good but I got all I need from this." He said then added now it's time to get a good look at things." Leon also knew a thing or two about Geobreakers in genreal prolonged use of it's boosters would cause an over heat just as it would in any zoid just finding the limit is the hard part. "Okay buddy let's show these guys what we can do." He said to his zoid.
Before taking off a full throttle toward the building he was facing running twenty-five feet up the building before bounding off. Catching hold of another building running another twenty-five before jumping off turing in mid air landing on the roof of the first building. Looking toward the Geno Breaker.
He commanded his blades to fold up on it's back and let the aiming eye piece cover his left eye. "This time I'm not gonna miss on purpose." He said into the live com link. He waited for three cross hairs to line up for his shots. The reason for the extra crosshairs was to limit him to dodging behind the building to his right. When he fired the first shot would be aimed at his chest the others would fire three seconds from the first.
HURRR.... Batsu was lying in wait the whole time it took Leon to get to him. Legs bent, Gyro Caps storing the potential energy for the attack to come. All Haku needed was the signal, and here it was. "Perfect." He smiled and slammed his feet on the pedals after jerking his arms back on the controls.
FWOOOOSH! Batsu roared as he kicked off the ground and ignited his Wing Thruster unit, flying up to meet Leon in the air. "YOU'RE MINE!" Haku exclaimed as he pushed his controls forward. The shots whisked by, hitting Batsu's X-Breaker shields. Spinning Gyro Caps propelled the X-Breaker mounts forward. Batsu then roared as his Breakers' scissors sprang into action to snap shut onto the Liger in front of them.
Leon stepped on a pedal pulling back on a control stick that ignited the boosters sending him foreward off the edge of the building narrowly avoiding the claw. "Damn were too evenly matched to end this fast." He said to himself. Falling down toward the ground he extened his blades and used the boosters again this time he glided toward a building that was leaning on another.
When he touched down he could feel the cockpit heating up Damn got to finish this thing fast one of those rolls of mine must have jammed the cooling vent shut or he could have got me I can't seem to remember. He thought "Hey you in the Genobreaker. What do you say we finish this in one final burst I don't know about you but I'm gettin a little warm." He said in the commlick. "Win Losse or Draw I gotta say your problably the best challenge I have have faced." He added.
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The RP isn't done, it's part of what I've been doing on RP.me. As you can see, I'm aiming to put more emphasis on the human pilots and be inside the cockpit more than out, as well as paying note to the technical aspects of the Zoids like the Gyro Caps and such.
Comments? Questions? Anything?
Though I'm of the personal opinion that coloured text for voiced words is a method of lazy writing, but I can't win them all... 
